User blog:GeigerLegendary/Wildclaw Journey (Don Judge)

'''Ok guys I'm so bored so I'm gonna write a story. Don't judge o_o. I've never done this before. Before I start I'm gonna say some random stuff. Ok First, I am doing this because I am bored. Second, I will edit this many times until it is done. Three please give me your opinion. Even if you don't like it please tell me how I can make it better. Fourth, please give me ideas or requests on what to write or what I can do. Again I've never done this before and I ain't gonna be good at this grammer thing so... Ya naw... Wish mer luck xD. And DANG this wiki needs autocorrect xP.'''


 *                               Prologue 

Wildpaw slowly awoken. It was chilly with the breeze blowing inside the apprentice den. Mudpaw and Dovepaw were on a border potrol with some warriors. It was nearly sunhigh when he woke up. Is body ached from lastnight's long journey. He remembered the long runn through the woods, over the boulders, and leaping over the small streams. They had went on a long journey to Mouthermouth, Fourtrees, and river that made the border of their Clans land. The mission was to go through all the Clan's camps without being spotted. They were not spotted by any Clan but one kit got a startle by the leaves Wildpaw had kicked up but got away cleanly. Wildpaw got so lost in his thoughts he nearly forgot about training! He darted out of the den, raced through trees, leaped a stream, and jumped over a boulder. Wildpaw landed in a circle of boulders.

This was the training hollow of DarkOak Leaves Clan. "Oakstar wishes to speek with you alone, Wildpaw. She didn't tell me why. Run along. You will catch up with training later," Spoke Rattail. Rattail was the Deputy of DarkOak Leaves Clan. Wildpaw leaped over the boulders, leaped back over the stream, raced back through the trees, and stopped at the edge of his camp. There is a 13 tail high fence that surronds the camp. Wildpaw climbed through a tunnel of ferns and raced to his Leader's den. Oakstar was waiting for him outside her den. Her den was a huge hole that was in every inch of High rock. Oakstar nodded at Wildpaw's appearence and leaped on his shoulders digging in all claws.


 *   Chapter1
 *   Ok guys I'm done for the day ): I know I'm not the best blogger out there but... I only 11 so... Yeah know... Anyways... I only did this because I was bored. So please comment so you can tell me if I am doing good or bad, ideas, request, or anything that can possibally make this book better. 
 *    I just wrote down some random names and I'm not basing this on the books by a long shot xD.
 *   Ok well I would like to know how I'm doing good or bad... Thanks .... Mr.MuffinMan out. SNOT POWER!
 * ~Thanks,
 * Bored Stranger of Awsomeness
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