User blog:Lethalclaw/The Legend Of Eidolon Clan

Alright so, this is a book. Really idk if I should show you all this book, but I don't know so.. I want your opinion with this sample of the book:

Ghostfang slowed down to a stop when he heard growls and snarls. He turned around, leaping behind a rock. He looked over the rock to see a huge wolf snarling and going towards camp. He froze, but remembered everybody else. He leapt over the rock and rammed into the wolves leg in attempt to knock it over. Ghostfang was flung into the air at the rock. He got up and tried to slash claws at the wolf, but was thrown even further. He reached the edge of the waterfall. He looked behind him in panic and at the wolf, then behind the wolf at the camp. He let out a sigh, [i]I will protect this clan.. With my life[/i] he looked back at the wolf but at the next moment was nearly flying off the edge and he clung to the wolves leg as he dropped down the waterfall at the rocks, where it snagged them both. Ghostfang let out one last sharp yowl and the wolf let out one last howl, before crashing into the water, sinking to the bottom with the now limp wolf. He got one last glance of the light, before going limp.LethalClaws ears perked up as she heard a sharp yowl and howl not that far away.Ghoulkit looked at the entrance of the camp, now hiding behind Coalkit who was behind LethalClaw.Floresentdecents head shot up as she heard the faint yowl and howl, too.