User blog:Nightshade03/The Prochecy of Nightshade Book 1: The Battle

What I have so far for my story. Good or Bad?

Chapter 1
Nightshade sat under a massive oak tree giving his dark pelt a gental wash. It has been a quarter moon since green-leaf has arrived and the gentle breeze of the forest blew around many scents of fattened pray. A hunting potral came back into camp. Runningnose was sitting at the edge of the medicine den, watching the peacful clan, Tigerstar was talking to his seniour warriors, and. Everything seemed peacful and nobody seemed to notice the new warrior, Nightshade, that had joined a moon ago. At the time Nightshade was a warrior that was traveling from lands behind highstones looking for a place to escape from the harsh snow last leaf-bear Shadowclan had threatened him to leave or die but he refused to leave and made himself a tiny den outside of the camp until the clan discovered him and invited him to their clan for his bravery. Now nobody even shot him a glance as if he wasn't even there.

Tigerstar leaped onto High Rock and shouted the words, "Cats old enough to catch their own prey may join under high rock for a clan meeting." All the cats wondered up to high rock wondering what the sudden meeting would be about. Tigerstar seemed to have on a warried face. "Cats of Shadowclan," he annouced. "Windclan has seemed to becoming allies with Thunderclan. This is a bond we can not afford. We will raid their camp now. I have had warriors stalk bounderies. All of their potrals are out now. We have a short window to attack while their camp is left with few warriors." Tigerstar leaped down from the High Rock and called warriors names. Nightshade went back to lay back under the ash tree were he had been all day when he noticed his name and turned around to see Tigerstar beckoning him to the line of warriors by the camp enterance.

Nightshade nodded in surprise and raced to the end of the line of the warriors. Black foot was at the front of line, beside Tigerstar who had just signaled his clan and they were all marching forward.